Art – Putting together art for the book 2

Some more examples of sketches that Lylith made for Coronation Necklace.

Probably one of the most complicated pictures thus far, we discussed how to do the musical tree in Wilten Crags quite a bit.

These were different ideas for dealing with the chimes.
The first started off far too mechanical.
Tree sketch 1

The second toned down how mechanical the tree looked, but I was looking for something similar to a willow tree.
Tree sketch 2

In the end we went with a less detailed and more distant look, with the tree looking fairly normal save for the coloring. It made more sense than attempting to draw thousands of chimes, which would take forever.
I love the overall feel of the finished product even if I would still make some adjustments. It has the gloomy feel of Wilten Crags and is an excellent opening picture for the story.

Art – Putting together art for the book

Some people might be wondering how the artwork for the series is decided on, and how many sketches are made before it’s finished.
I work with Lylith, giving her the details and telling her things to change when going through the artwork. Is all the artwork exactly how I pictured it in my head? Of course not. When adding artwork to a book it’s necessary to realize that the artist’s artistic vision is going to be part of it.

I told her that I wanted Axe and General Glaive on the upper portion of the cover, with Leander being “loomed over” somehow (of course I gave more details than that, but that’s a brief summary).
At that point she came up with a way to try and get the look I was going for.
Here are some examples sketches we went over for the cover of “Coronation Necklace”.
Lylith's Cover Sketch

As you can see, that’s not how it looked when finished. A wall was added behind Leander, and the actual cover has him more at an angle rather than straight forward.
Lylith - Leander CN Cover Sketch

Some adjustments were made to figure out how Leander should be positioned.
One of the things Lylith mentioned is that in the final product Leander is positioned in a way that is more typical for a female character – something that worked for both of us.

The same happened with the back cover. For the picture of Ellora accompanying the letter, I asked for her to look irritated, and Lylith made some sketches.
Lylith - Back Cover

Again, adjustments were made. I went with the first sketch, but asked her to make Ellora look slightly less angry.

Working with an artist on a book communication is important, and knowing when to let go is important, too. It’s no longer just your work but partially their work, too. I’m fortunate to have Lylith to work with, because she’s a great person to talk to, a hard worker and is extremely patient, and there are plenty of things that have ended up in the artwork for the book that I never had planned.

One example of this is the swirlies that ended up on the army hats.
Swirlies
If you read the text, there’s never any mention of there being red swirls on their hats. This was completely artistic license, and it’s this type of thing where the art is based on the book, and the book can come around to be based on the art (by adding the swirls as canon later on).

That has been my experience working with an illustrator on the book. I’m blessed to have such a great artist to work with, and being a fan of artwork in books I hope I see more authors and artists working together in the future.

Writing

Having completed the files for “Coronation Necklace”, this entry is to discuss what it was like working on this book.

The story changed a lot from what I initially wrote. “Flute of the Wind Queen” did as well, for that matter (“Flute of the Wind Queen” was originally only 9 chapters long).

For the first book I had two editors (with one listed in the credits). I was nervous about only having one editor for the second book.
The editing for the first one took eight or so months. The editing on the second was closer to six weeks. It was a big difference.
The artwork went a little differently as well. Because of the editing change I wasn’t sure what to expect, and held off on getting the artwork done until I knew what changes were going to be made.

I’m finding that I’m just as anxious about how well this book will be received as I was the first book, if not moreso. My editor and I ran into technical problems with this book. I had upgraded from an older Microsoft Word to 2007. When I sent her my files spaces would randomly disappear from the document. The same thing happened when she sent me back the file.
We were using two different versions of MS Word and they apparently didn’t like each other. This happened a few times before we figured out a way to fix it. I went through the book each time to try and make sure that it was okay, but with less editing and the technical problems I’m still afraid I might have missed something somewhere.

I’ve devoted much time and attention to “Coronation Necklace”, though. It is finished, and it’s time for me to focus on “The General’s Bust”.

Book 3

With the recent release of Coronation Necklace, some people might be wondering if I have anything done yet on the third book.
And with that I’ll answer with a picture drawn by Nupao.
Delmar by Nupao

The General’s Bust has a completed rough draft thus far. It needs to be combed through and re-written before given to an editor.